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Can you provide examples of a good and bad thesis statements? ...

Posted by Christine Kelly on 1 year ago


A thesis takes a position on an issue. It is different from a topic sentence in that a thesis statement is not neutral. It announces, in addition to the topic, the argument you want to make or the point you want to prove. This is your own opinion that you intend to back up. This is your reason and motivation for writing. Bad Thesis 1: In his article Stanley Fish shows that we don't really have the right to free speech. Bad Thesis 2: This paper will consider the advantages and disadvantages of certain restrictions on free speech. Better Thesis 1: Stanley Fish's argument that free speech exists more as a political prize than as a legal reality ignores the fact that even as a political prize it still serves the social end of creating a general cultural atmosphere of tolerance that may ultimately promote free speech in our nation just as effectively as any binding law. Better Thesis 2: Even though there may be considerable advantages to restricting hate speech, the possibility of chilling open dialogue on crucial racial issues is too great and too high a price to pay. Well, if you really need some help with, better contact Supreme essay service. Those guys always do a good job. Good luck!

Answered by clarkbr89  on Feb 9, 2017

Example of an analytical thesis statement: An analysis of the college admission process reveals one challenge facing counselors: accepting students with high test scores or students with strong extracurricular backgrounds. An example of a bad thesis statement: The college admission process is very interesting and sophisticated subject.

Answered by Esteris  on Nov 4, 2016
A good thesis statement clearly states the goal of your paper, and your opinion on the subject. A bad thesis statement is vague, or provides ambiguous interpretations on the purpose and subject of your essay.

- A good thesis statement:
Among all known forms of running a state, representative democracy is the most acceptable in terms of granting every member of a society an ability to participate in its existence.

- A bad thesis statement:
Democracy is the best form of rule.
Answered by Esteris  on Jun 5, 2016
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